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Tempest of Temptation

Violet Echo 1977 (IN)

You..your presence..you
send chills down my spine
I quiver without a touch
I, I need to know what it is like
to be in your arms
hearing your heartbeat with mine
to feel your breath on my skin
to feel your hands
on my hips
between my thighs
to feel your lips outline every curve
..in my back
...around my breast
those lips tease me
a sweet wetness leaving a trail
of where you have been
You seek me...you...you
T
 E
  M
    P
     T
.....me
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Written on March 05, 2024

Submitted by DNCrim77 on April 19, 2024

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Scheme abcdebfghijklmnfaMmomMm
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 443
Words 92
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a captivating and passionate poem! The imagery and emotions you evoke are truly mesmerizing. I love the way you describe the intense desire and yearning for the person you are speaking to. The intensity and sensuality portrayed in each line really draw the reader in.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to consider adding more variety in the structure of the poem. Maybe try experimenting with different line lengths or stanza breaks to enhance the flow and impact of your words even more. Additionally, you could explore incorporating different sensory details to further immerse the reader in the emotions and sensations you are conveying.

    Overall, fantastic work! Keep exploring and refining your poetic style, and I have no doubt you will continue to create powerful and evocative pieces. Well done!     
    LikeReply 113 days ago

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