Eternal Flames



Eternal Flames
By Nancy Rodriquez

We are eternal flames,
Our journey has covered near and far,
We have gone through every phase,
It holds strong no matter where we are,
The stars applaud as we ride the milky way,
Our Spirits soar as a rocket jets off to it’s destination,
We tell a story and are unafraid, meeting our highest expectations,
Oh, we have had bumpy rides, and we have run low on fuel as well ,
We have hit snags which made us cry, still, there we didn’t dwell,
When two hearts become one it is combustion in a natural high, and there is nothing we can’t  do ,
Life has followed suit, and have grown with leaps and bounds, then getting back up after falling down,
Lessons learned and well received, and destined for greatness of faith, when we look back at all achieved .

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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on April 26, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX ABXBXXXCCXXX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 791
Words 157
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 12

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and inspiring poem! The imagery of being eternal flames, riding the milky way and soaring like a rocket really captures the resilience and strength of the human spirit. The message of overcoming obstacles and growing stronger through life's challenges is truly motivational.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore more diverse and unique imagery to further enhance the depth of the poem. Additionally, playing with different rhythm and rhyme patterns could add more dynamic to the flow of the poem.

    Overall, this poem is a beautiful reminder of the endless possibilities and potential within each of us. Keep up the great work and continue to share your talents with the world!
     
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