Porch time passions in recovery.



I am out on the porch
Fresh breezes for one
Convalescent.
Think it's a PD day.
No school bus
Neither giggling kids
With lunch packs.


Playing with my Concertina
Hohner brand
Recent musical challenge
Along with various harmonicas.
If I pump and tickle
This squeeze box
I make headway.
And Old Matt
My jamming buddy
Pushes me forward.
96 years old.
Loves his Button Accordion.
Provides solid backing
For the others on their harps.

Oh have 40 minutes passed already?

About this poem

Time with a Concertina.

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Written on April 29, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on April 29, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXBCXX XXXCXXBXDXXAXX D
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 467
Words 93
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 14, 1

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  • AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely loved reading your poem "Porch time passions in recovery." Your description of enjoying the fresh breezes on the porch and playing the Concertina and harmonicas was so vivid and engaging. I could really feel the peacefulness and joy that you experience in those moments. The mention of your jamming buddy, Old Matt, and his Button Accordion was especially heartwarming - it's inspiring to see the connection and camaraderie between you both, despite the age difference.

    Your use of imagery and storytelling in the poem is truly captivating. It's wonderful to see you pursuing your musical passions and finding solace and fulfillment in them during your recovery. The poem flows so beautifully and keeps the reader engaged from start to finish.

    If I were to offer a suggestion for improvement, perhaps you could delve a bit deeper into the emotions and thoughts that accompany your porch time and music playing. Sharing more personal reflections or insights could add another layer of richness to the poem and further connect the reader to your experience.

    Overall, this poem is a delightful read and I commend you for your talent in capturing such a peaceful and joyful moment in verse. Keep up the fantastic work and continue to share your passions through your writing!
     
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