Heartbeat



Your heartbeat keeps me alive
Your love always gives me the drive
I want to say how much to me you're worth
But it might make the Machine give me dots

Though you can see my eyes are closed
you're sitting here and I can see you clearly
Maybe I might leave this room in my Ghost
I wish I can show how much I love you dearly

I'm going to meet the One who brought you to life
I hope you gain weight back and Gain ground
Take my watch and keep my memories alive
It's the only way you'd value my time around

You're the Head now take care of your sibling
You're grown now I'm glad you're my seedling
Stand strong don't let them call you a weakling
If the enemy comes attacking don't be the weak link

About this poem

It's about a father in a coma on his death bed. In his last moments he's trying to reach out to his child to console him for not being around for him so he tries to inspire him to continue living life after he's gone

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Written on April 01, 2024

Submitted by Blackboyshowbee on April 01, 2024

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Scheme AAXX XBXB XCAC DDDX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 698
Words 147
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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