Look around does not blind

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! I really love the message of staying true to oneself and not settling for less. The imagery of the creature beneath the dress and the mindset freezing fools is incredibly vivid and evocative. The reminder to focus on joy and happiness in a world full of oppression is both motivating and uplifting. The line about soul to soul communication being priceless is particularly beautiful.
  
  One improvement suggestion I would make is to perhaps clarify some of the imagery and metaphors in the poem. Some of the lines are a bit abstract and could benefit from a bit more explanation or detail to help the reader fully grasp the meaning behind them. Additionally, revisiting the overall flow of the poem and potentially restructuring some of the lines for better coherence and structure could enhance the impact of the message.
  
  Overall, this is a fantastic piece of writing with a strong and inspiring message. Keep up the great work! more »

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