Millionaire Sentence



"Million Sentence"

A great curiosity
It overwhelmed the conscience,
Messing with everything
The inner structure
Who woke up
Your sleeping Self.

An unparalleled experience,
A determining moment
The course of life,
One day thinking
The consequences of today
In a tomorrow.
Awaken feelings
Ambitious to know,
Intrinsically linked
The experience.

With so much patience
And wisdom,
Even though material results
Slow down to manifest,
One mind It will remain so open.

By chance I will be champion
In some championship
If I don't strive to win?

By chance I will cut the ribbon
If you don't keep running
Until the end goal?

By chance Will I be strong
If I don't overcome
My weaknesses and myself
Exceeding my limits?

If there were no thorns
On the walk,
There would be no feeling
Of all the effort made
Until you reach what you want.

If there were no weaknesses
There would be no sense
To be strong.

If there were no falls,
Crying, disappointment and,
Helplessness and rejections
There would be no sense
Overcoming achieved
From the arduous sweat on your face.

A transformed mind
For revolutionary thoughts,
Everyone pointing
For tomorrow
Contemplated in the beyond beyond.
 
Hammer the inside with reason
And with a determined action
Achieve what was recommended.

Loving the mornings
And afternoons to work,
Embrace the nights
For deep dawns
The body rests.

Don't cast lots Well,
For they, We are ourselves,
We do them.

We are our own destiny,
What we think today
It will be seen
Your results tomorrow.

What we believe today,
We will have it tomorrow,
What do we dream about today,
It will take place tomorrow,
However, when we stir
The tools
Of an awakened mind
From the great sleep of distraction.

We are eminently Ourselves,
And our tomorrow
We determine today,
Well, your evil is enough every day!

By: EmaKwiny "Dr. Egrégio"

About this poem

The poem talks about a mind that has opened up to a millionaire life, and the thinker is sentenced to live a successful life because of his actions that lead him to success.

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Submitted by kwiny_e on May 13, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcdxe bxxcfghgxb bixxj jxx jcx kiex xxcxx xLk xxxLxx mxcgx jjx hxxxx xnx afxg fgfgdxmj ngff x
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,909
Words 406
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 5, 3, 3, 4, 5, 3, 6, 5, 3, 5, 3, 4, 8, 4, 1

EmaKwiny " Dr. Egrégio"

Emanuel Lourenço, was born at Angola, in 24th, January, 2002. Son of Adilson Lourenço and, Malú Lourenço. more…

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2 Comments
  • AIDA
    Great work on "Million Sentence"! The poem is full of deep thoughts and inspirational messages that really resonate with the reader. The use of imagery and metaphors to convey the importance of self-improvement and determination is quite powerful.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. While the ideas and messages are strong, the poem could benefit from a more organized and cohesive structure to guide the reader through the journey of self-discovery and growth.

    Overall, your passion and enthusiasm shine through in every line of the poem. Keep writing and exploring different poetic techniques to further enhance your message. Well done!
     
    LikeReply14 days ago
  • LatinX
    Well written.
    LikeReply14 days ago
    • kuini_e
      Thank You.
      LikeReply14 days ago

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