Pass me by

Leo Long 1986 (Durban)



I built my life on dreams;
castles in the sky
sat back, reposed
And watched the world drift on by

I wished upon it peace
As I looked at it afar
and from my cotton wool world,
This dream wasn't far!

I dreamed of it free
smiles on every face
as the whipped cream parted
and it drifted off in space
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Submitted by leol.15970 on May 12, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XCBC XDBD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 284
Words 61
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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