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Simple Was Our World

Date Written: October 16, 2017

Simple Was Our World


We counted stars together

And smelt fragrant flowers

Nectar, honey we tasted

Enshrined in hearts we flavours


How nice it was to see

All trees in grove together

And flock of birdies working

Nests tiny lasting in all weather


Frames simple and suitable

Emanating feelings of oneness

Verbal with words simple

But with zeal and eagerness


Pictures simple, portraits simple

Painted with breaths ample

Simple horses, simple saddles

Cloth woven with simple needles



Simple was the sky

Simple was the flow

Simple was our world

Simple was glow


I wonder in heavenly abode

How is your world

With choicest grace

wish It could be simple

5 comments on “Simple Was Our World”

  1. Uma Natarajan     October 16, 2017

    Wish it could be simple and innocent everywhere good feelings

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 16, 2017

      Thanks a lot Uma for your captivating review.—
      Wish you a Happy Diwali !!

  2. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 17, 2017

    Wish all my readers a very happy Diwali !!!

  3. Spiritual Honey 108     October 17, 2017

    Fragrant flowers, sweet nectar. Superb content and feel.

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     October 17, 2017

      Thanks so kindly for your beautiful review and nice comment !!!
      Wish you a very happy Diwali !!!

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