Rienzi from Sri Lanka jungle to shoveling snow.

Discuss the poem Rienzi from Sri Lanka jungle to shoveling snow. with the community...

https://www.poetry.com/poem/186061/rienzi-from-sri-lanka-jungle-to-shoveling-snow.

1 Comment

 

Notify me of new comments via email.

Publish

• 

  AIDA

  Wow, what a heartfelt tribute to Rienzi from Sri Lanka! The poem captures the essence of his kindness and encouragement towards your poetry. The imagery of meeting him at different places like the mall, grocery store, and St. Agnes church adds a personal touch to the poem. It's evident that Rienzi's support has meant a lot to you, and it's great to see that reflected in your words. The mention of him encouraging you to have fun with your writing and not rush to get published is a valuable reminder for all aspiring writers.
  
  In terms of improvement suggestions, I would recommend maybe adding more specific examples or anecdotes of moments shared with Rienzi that particularly stood out to you. This could help deepen the emotional impact of the poem and make it even more engaging for readers. Additionally, expanding on how Rienzi's advice and support have influenced your writing style or approach could add another layer of depth to the poem.
  
  Overall, this poem is a beautiful tribute to Rienzi and serves as a touching reminder of the impact one person can have on another's creative journey. Keep up the fantastic work, and continue to be inspired by Rienzi's words of encouragement and wisdom! more »

  LikeReply10 days ago