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I'll Find Oasis

I’ll Find Oasis

My Dear
Bewildered me Deer
Me Deer ran through your heartless desert dry
But couldn’t get water after many a try

Your eyes appeared tearful
However your tears turned out to be a mirage deceitful
Me thirsty Deer running through the desert loveless
A lovely oasis therein is the only solace

Though me Deer is facing water crisis
My Dear, one day within you in deep abyss, I’ll find oasis
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I'll Find Oasis , by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
ARUN MAZUMDER 12 months ago
FINE
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Thank you very much for your very nice review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your nice appreciation.
Stella W 12 months ago
Lovely write here Adhav!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
A belated big thank you for your very beautiful review .!
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Thanks a million for your nice appreciation

Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Your splendid comments mean a lot to me !
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Have a wonderful and blissful day ! Dear Stella !
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 months ago
My Dear,one day within you in deep abyss I'll find oasis.
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem .
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Wish you a happy read .
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Happy Today!
Coy Day 12 months ago
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Jamal E Halabi 12 months ago
IT SO SAD WHEN PEOPLE TRY TO BE INTELLIGENT IN THEIR APPROACH TO SURVUVAL BUT THEY "MISS GOD AND HIS SON JESUS CHRIST" WHERE ALL TREASURES DWELL....
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Subhashchandra Adhav 11 months ago
Thank you. 
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