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My Body-----My Spirit

My body----My Spirit

In my bony body, my fleshy thought
I wonder how my body is wrought
Within me free soul absolute
It is engulfed by the veins resolute
I dive deep in the abyss of soul
However my spiritless blood makes attempt foul
My body itself is threat to free-ness of soul
It is glued to the idea of material bowl
Throbbing of the heart is my concern main
“Labyrinth of Veins” without flow is in vain
I wonder how I could be spiritually fit
I’m waiting for the Heavenly spirit
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My Body-----My Spirit, by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
I'm waiting for the  Heavenly spirit.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love poem.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Wish you a happy read.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Happy Today!
Patricia Batteate 4 months ago
This is so beautifully descriptive .  How does one combine the material world with the spirit world in terms of our soul.  Only the dead really know and we too shall know when it is our time.  The main thing is, preparation  and I know you know what that is.....
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thank you so kindly Patricia for your beautiful and incisive review .---
Wish you a Happy New Year .!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation !

Hassen Gara 4 months ago
Awesome .Please review my haiku http://poetry.com/poems/1700831-HOMELESS-PEOPLE.Thanks 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your nice review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Akash Sharma 4 months ago
great
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your nice review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Stella W 4 months ago

Excellent Poetry Adhav!!!  ---  That Heavenly Spirit!!!! 


Stella W 4 months ago
Have a Fantastic Day Adhav!!!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Great many thanks Dear Stella for your superb comment.
Stella W 4 months ago
It´s always an Honor Adhav!!!!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your heartfelt appreciation.
Stella W 4 months ago
Always a Pleasure!!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Have a very beautiful day!
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