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The stars were falling

Sky was breaking and stars were falling on my head.
I was moving on the path of life counting the stars.
Pieces of heaven were being scattered on the earth.
Collecting the pieces I was envisioning in those my dreams and hopes.
I was fighting the life's battles.
After the battles were over and I was a winner there was created a new sky with the full moon and the stars.
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The stars were falling, by SUBRAT RATH 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 3 reviews.
SUBRAT RATH 5 days ago
Sky and the stars were participating in my life's battle.
Elizabeth C 5 days ago
You had me from the very first line! Beautiful.
Steph L 5 days ago
I love this take on life's journey. Creating your own stary sky. Keep creating.
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