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Twilight

Twilight

Bathed in the twilight
My childhood,
Before taking bath-----
Beauty of the sinking sun
Gave it happy mood;

Bathed in the twilight
My adulthood,
Before taking bath-----
Fascinating sun down
Gave vigour good;

Bathing in the twilight
My twilight years,
After spectacular sunset
Why in my mind fears?
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Subhashchandra Adhav 11 days ago
The poet has tried to invite attention to senility years !!!
Twilight, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
After spectacular sunset
Why in my mind fears ?
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Wish you a happy read !
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Happy Today!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I  so appreciate your heartfelt support!
ARUN MAZUMDER 13 days ago
very well done
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation 

Andrea Price 13 days ago
Nice lyrics, giving a glimpse of how a person's life transition in phases
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Jawahar Gupta 13 days ago
truly
the need of fearless
far from the fear
Aum Tramakam Yaja Mahe,,,,,,,,,,,
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review 

Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation 

Sonja Carnes 13 days ago
Sometimes, I believe, the fear we have is only an unknown traveler that ask to be known.
We open our hearts, and our minds, and our Spirit becomes clearer, our eyes, brighter.
How beautiful you're poem is! I can see the twilight hour's sweetly bathing the skin, 
What you give in this poem, is the creation of man and elements at it's best! Bless you,
In all you do. This is beautifully written and Expressed! Thank you, Subhashchandra!

Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
So nice and kind of you!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I  so appreciate your heartfelt and valuable comments. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I  value your encouraging comments 

Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I appreciate your extraordinary input!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Your comments are inspiring and invigorating!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I so appreciate your heartfelt and kind words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
You are truly blessed!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Be blessing be with you always!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Have a blissful day!
Om Prakash 13 days ago
Nice and lucid, how age causes different perceptions. End is poignant !0
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
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