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Only Common In Expiration

Anger, anxious , I boil to lengths fueled.
Insistence, igniting my flames uncouth.

No sense
No structure 

Hath minds meticulate of nothing known, expired?
Do they transmit void valiancy of non variants? 

In uncertain signals
In uncertain urgencies

Versified meters, I volume unread and misconstrued.
And only particulates present, we share as our remains.
 
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Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Trying to understand how people can go through life uneducated and ignorant with no passion or want for betterment
Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 19 reviews.
Tara Treglown More than 1 year ago
I truly love this work of art! Keep writing!
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you, very kind of you. i have 13 pgs of work on here if you wish to read
Rob More than 1 year ago
I UNDERSTOOD EVERY WORD DEEP WITHIN...
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed and understood it.i am sure a lot won't lol
Maria Mestanza More than 1 year ago
very talented i like
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you, i'm happy you enjoyed it
henra z More than 1 year ago
Seeps deep
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you, very nice of you to say
Lamar Ingraham 5 months ago
You were a magician of language, and it would be most respectful, perhaps even ethical, not to look too closely into the workings of your magic. But it’s to the brilliance of your credit that analysis of your methods does nothing to erode the joy of amazing stories. Like all good magic, YOURS just cannot be explained away. And thank God for that.
doina More than 1 year ago
love it
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you as always x
Edward Willard More than 1 year ago
Thank you Gabriel for sending this talented writer my way! "Anger, Anxiuos, I boil to lengths fueld" Very deep and very vivid! 5000 stars
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thanks to Gabriel as well and thank you for liking and reviewing my work. It's very much appreciated.
Sarah Leo More than 1 year ago
I really enjoyed this, it was unique and intelligent. Well done.
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thank you, i appreciate your comments and happy you enjoyed reading.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
very good
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you Gabriel
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
i l;iked the tiltle
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you, much appreciated x
Shahab Ahmad More than 1 year ago
love it
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you
Arun N.K. More than 1 year ago
Well written
Chico James More than 1 year ago
Makes perfect sense in nothingness.
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you, glad you understood it and enjoyed it
Tom Christopher More than 1 year ago
you sure do love alliteration :-)
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
i do indeed
Cornell Mack More than 1 year ago
nice
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
poetry written in a flowing language
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
liked the read
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thanks
Chris Misdary More than 1 year ago
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Toccata In F More than 1 year ago
Perhap a rewrite would turn this into a powerful poem. Right now it just sounds like you're trying too hard.
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thanks but I do not edit my work, so therefore, there is no 'trying too hard'. All my work is jotted down in a book and put straight onto here. No trying hard. Perhaps you have a problem with my bio but that was written harshly to be directed towards the idiots.
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