Lonely
by
Ireland Vela
Left alone in the dark
On my way to breaking, almost at the mark
Never given a reason to live, not even to speak
Everywhere I go I want people to look at me, my face, just a peak
Living is a lie, but it's all I can do
You can help me just give me something, anything, just something new
On my way to breaking, almost at the mark
Never given a reason to live, not even to speak
Everywhere I go I want people to look at me, my face, just a peak
Living is a lie, but it's all I can do
You can help me just give me something, anything, just something new
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
really loved this struck a chord with me, keep up the excellent work
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Get your points across creatively... nice heartfelt phrasing... good sense of rhyming...
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could u write part two?
need more insight on
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Keep writing
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Nice message
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