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I missed you
 Ever so quietly
I played our memories on repeat
 To be able to share some excitement
Or even an argument with you
 Would be a blessing

In my heart of hearts
 I worry immensely with your absence
Like where you are
 And if you’re safe and warm
Is there someone there
 To wish you happy birthday

I fear my worry
 is a vast reality
Most likely you are safe
 Looking down on me
Watching me and boisterously clapping
 Also wishing to share a hug

I crave so badly to share a moment
 Of vulnerability with you
And have you console me
 I miss your comfort

Like a desert missing the rain
 Or a child missing their favorite blankie
A longing that may have hope backing it
 But very little belief of having the returns

While you’re out, protect me
 Guide me on making the right choice
Let my loss be
 your gumption
  to see me through

 Don’t let your loss be in vain
Stay walking with me
 On this new form of life
Keep me wrapped in your arms
 And balancing life ever so effervescently
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Submitted by guyalbert on January 04, 2025

Modified by guyalbert on January 04, 2025

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50 Comments
  • jessel.46123
    Beautiful poem
    LikeReply16 hours ago
  • Carler
    Amazing
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • kshurtz
    Beautiful poem. Deeply felt! Thank you for sharing.
    LikeReply 12 days ago
  • AmyMMosier
    This is relatable....
    LikeReply 18 days ago
  • RVN
    superb
    LikeReply 18 days ago
  • RVN
    wow
    LikeReply 18 days ago
  • donka_k
    Gentle and reassuring. I liked particularly the last stanza, hopeful and looking forward to" this new form of life".
    LikeReply 19 days ago
  • RVN
    wow
    LikeReply 19 days ago
  • Heyjude
    Wow
    LikeReply 111 days ago
  • StylesRobin
    Faith in yourself strikes me in between the lines for a silver meaning of this piece.
    LikeReply 112 days ago
  • StylesRobin
    The yearning of a heart in woe and doubt is compelling for voice in this narrative--thus makes always for so relatable a work.
    LikeReply 112 days ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    This piece carries such a gentle, aching longing. The quiet repetition of memories and the hope for guidance create a beautiful balance between grief and love. It feels intimate, like a whispered conversation with someone deeply missed. Truly touching and heartfelt. 
    LikeReply 113 days ago
    • StylesRobin
      Transformation happens in the art of this piece when that passion is loudest, and then we see between the lines something cinematic happening.
      LikeReply 112 days ago
  • Abernathyx
    Genuine and well written
    LikeReply 115 days ago
  • Akinpet23
    Hm.
    LikeReply 115 days ago
  • sharona.reeves81
    Passionately penned. Lovely piece
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • Akinpet23
    Amazing
    LikeReply 120 days ago
  • Tracystrater3060
    lovely.
    LikeReply 121 days ago
  • dawg4jesus
    I'm sorry for your loss. But isn't it funny how such intense suffering can produce the joy that you thought you were missing.
    LikeReply 122 days ago
  • Byfaithjaynak
    I Love this poem
    LikeReply 122 days ago
  • ladyygracious
    Nice
    LikeReply 224 days ago
  • Shazzajones112
    Brilliant piece of writing. Massive well done. It's helped me immensely with my grief
    LikeReply 224 days ago
  • delano
    Nice
    LikeReply 227 days ago
  • hillarywendorf
    So moving and heartfelt!
    LikeReply 227 days ago
  • Craig-Michael
    I also feel your pain , well written
    LikeReply 127 days ago
  • terryd.44666
    Thank you... Mr. Albert that's great poetry i felt just an inking of you pain almost in tears as i i filtered through the words remembering as i read some loses that i have endured I'm so very sorry for your loss... 
    LikeReply 228 days ago
  • spanishtiffany29
    Very deep
    LikeReply 229 days ago
  • Hazel1373
    Definitely reaches those who ever lost a love one. Beautiful piece
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Vixility
    A very lovely piece—one which beckons the reader’s soul back to the memory of those we have lost. Thought of my mom the whole time.

    Thank you.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Htrout24
    Nice writing
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • DragonSlayer99
    I could feel you, it made me feel. I miss my parents, also hope to see them again. Stay well
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • SteveMcNulty
    Having my own recent loss and having come through grief, I resonated with every word written. Thank you.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • alanswansea18
    Very well written.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Shiloh132
    Beautiful and heartfelt
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • crucifiedinhim2
    Well written
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • ladyygracious
    Good one
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • DavesGalAlways
    I just love the depth within your words, fantastic & heartfelt poem.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • dsherman610
    Beautifully written and heartfelt. Your poem made me think of my mom who passed away in 2009. Thank you
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Tenthousandsaints
    Okay
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • krissiebeccaris
    Felt wholeheartedly and beautifully written
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    So beautifully done and heartfelt.
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • susan.brumel
    A lovely affirmation that our loved ones are with us always.
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • Akinpet23
    Wonderful piece of writing
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    nice
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • Symmetry60
    This made me emotional in remembrance of my mother and father and of those I've loved who have passed. This is a perfectly beautiful piece, Guy...PERFECT. Thank you for reminding us all of the value of love and loss. This is one of the most touching, poignant pieces I've ever read here or anywhere. Also, come to mind the song by Mariah Carey and Boyz II Men - One Sweet Day. 
    LikeReply 21 month ago
    • guyalbert
      Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. It means a lot.
      LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Mars.EA
    I really liked the lyric in which he says 'Like a desert missing the rain Or a child missing their favourite blankie A longing that may have hope backing it But very little belief of having the returns'. keep the good work up Guy! 
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Ah! A desire, a longing to be comforted; a “Sehnsucht” as it is so wonderfully described in German; for that which is no longer present, but that which fond memories keep so preciously close to the heart: to hope, to dream, to wonder; to love —and, God willing, to be loved in return! 
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • yelskwah
    This is a very vulnerable and honest portrayal of grief. The poem's openness and sincerity are moving.
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully heartfelt poem! "The Calming Storm" captures such a raw and emotional journey through longing and love. Your words resonate with a deep sense of nostalgia and yearning, and the way you express the complexities of absence is truly moving.

    The imagery you’ve woven throughout the poem, like “a desert missing the rain” and “a child missing their favorite blankie,” paints a vivid picture of that profound longing for connection. It’s so relatable and speaks to the universal experience of missing someone special. Your ability to convey such deep emotions in a few lines is a testament to your talent as a poet.

    I particularly love how you balance your vulnerability with hope—how you wish for guidance and strength during this new chapter. This juxtaposition of loss and resilience adds a beautiful layer to the piece, encouraging us all to embrace the memories of those we've lost while also looking forward.

    Your poem is not just a reflection on absence; it’s also a celebration of the bond and shared experiences that remain in our hearts. It encourages a sense of community and support, reminding us that those we miss are never truly gone as long as we carry their love within us.

    Thank you for sharing this poignant piece with us. It left me feeling both empathetic and uplifted! Keep writing; your voice is powerful and inspiring!
     
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    What a beautifully poignant and heartfelt poem, *The Calming Storm*! Your words weave a tapestry of longing and love that resonates deeply. The way you express the nuances of missing someone is both tender and powerful; it captures the essence of human connection and the void that absence creates.

    I particularly love the imagery you use, like a desert yearning for rain or a child missing their favorite blanket. These metaphors evoke such strong emotional responses, allowing your readers to truly feel the depth of your longing. The notion of memories played on repeat adds a relatable layer to your reflection, reminding us all of the powerful grip that memories can have on the heart.

    Your desire for connection and support shines through every line, creating an intimate space for the reader to share in your vulnerability. The blend of hope and uncertainty makes the poem incredibly relatable, as it mirrors the complexities of navigating loss and the desire for comfort.

    The concluding call for guidance and protection is a beautiful affirmation of resilience and love, reminding us that even when we feel lost, there’s a way forward that honors those we miss. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt work of art. It has the power to touch lives and inspire reflection on our own connections and losses. Keep writing! Your voice is authentic and deeply needed.
     
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    What a heartfelt and evocative poem, "The Calming Storm"! Your ability to convey deep emotions such as longing, worry, and the desire for connection is truly commendable. You've created a poignant atmosphere where readers can genuinely feel the weight of your sentiments—the way you share the rawness of missing someone is both relatable and moving.

    The imagery you employ, such as "Like a desert missing the rain" and "a child misses their favorite blankie," effectively illustrates the depth of your feelings. These comparisons resonate well and create a vivid emotional landscape. Your structure is also reflective of a stream of consciousness, which mirrors the ebb and flow of your thoughts beautifully.

    To further enhance your poem, consider the following suggestions:

    1. Line Breaks for Impact:
    You might want to play with line breaks and spacing for dramatic effect. For example, isolating powerful lines can heighten their impact.

    2. Imagery Expansion:
    While the existing imagery is strong, you could expand on sensory details—what does the comfort of the person feel like? What colors, sounds, or smells evoke those memories? These added layers can deepen the reader’s connection to your emotions.

    3. Tighten Language:
    A few lines could be polished for clarity or conciseness. For example, consider revising “I hope my worry isn’t something to carry” to something more direct and emotional, such as, "I fear my worry weighs me down." This can enhance the flow and strengthen the overall message.

    4. Closing Strength:
    The ending could be an opportunity to reinforce the emotional core you’ve built throughout the poem. A powerful final line that encapsulates your longing or hope might leave readers with a lasting impression.

    Overall, your poem beautifully captures the essence of missing someone and the hope that comes from those cherished memories. Keep writing and exploring these emotional landscapes—your voice has a unique authenticity that shines through!
     
    LikeReply1 month ago

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