Analysis of Ice Fission



Will we tiptoe through the tulips?
Will we walk around on eggshells?
Will we dance defiant on thin ice
Poised above the fires of Hell?

Shall I breathe your life into me
To be fed instead heart-burning death?
Will I taste it from your lips?
Will I feel it in your breath?

Do you see yourself as savior?
Do you see yourself as whore?
Have you nothing less to offer?
Have you nothing more?

Will felonies and fiery seas 
Burn so I don't recognize me?
Will I love the feel of your heat
Or will your third degrees scar me?

Disappear into atmosphere
Memories in dissipation
Cold breath hovers, thought bubbles
Over empty conversation

Do you see yourself as savior?
Do you see yourself as whore?
Have you nothing less to offer?
Have you nothing more?

The lake is frozen over now
I walk alone on solid ground
To the cord of such discord
Will I be no longer bound

The fire below is burning still
You know that wasn't very nice
You left me with a burning heart
I left you beneath the ice

Do you see yourself as savior?
Do you see yourself as whore?
Have you nothing less to offer?
Have you nothing more?

© John Kennan 4/5/14


Scheme xxax bcxc DEDE xbxb xfxf DEDE xgxg xaxa DEDE f
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 1110111 111010111 10101011 11111011 111011101 1111111 1111011 11101110 1110111 11101110 11101 110001001 1111101 11101111 11110111 010110 1000010 1110110 1010010 11101110 1110111 11101110 11101 01110101 11011101 1011110 1111101 010011101 11110101 11110101 1110101 11101110 1110111 11101110 11101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,084
Words 211
Sentences 21
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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