Analysis of When Once I Was Ten

Alan S Jeeves 1951 (Lancashire)



Where I lived when I was ten
I sometimes think of there, and then,
When I'm drowsing in my chair
My dozy thoughts go back to there.

I rest nearby a fireside glare
Glass in hand and here is where
I think of things I used to do
When I was merely eight and two.

This was when my world was new,
In the hours before I grew,
Out the door and down the way,
This is where I used to play.

When all the words I used to say
Concerned such things as came that day.
All the songs I used to sing
And all the joy that they would bring.

No more I live where I was king
Yet still the memories from there ring.
I've been aside so long a time
Yet still the memories from there chime.

So, as I dream of days, sublime;
As recollections higher climb;
I sometimes, now, remember when...
And how I wish that I was ten.


Scheme AABB BBCC CCDD DDEE EEFF FFAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 10111101 111011 1111111 11110101 1010111 11111111 11110101 1111111 00100111 1010101 1111111 11011111 01111111 1011111 01011111 11111111 110100111 11011101 110100111 11111101 1010101 10110101 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 772
Words 165
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

A nostalgic look back to a time now, gone for ever. Written in 2020 with a strict rhyming scheme.

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Submitted by AlanSJeeves on June 21, 2021

Modified by AlanSJeeves on June 21, 2021

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Alan S Jeeves

Alan S Jeeves is a Lancashire (England) born, Yorkshire based classical poet. more…

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