Analysis of As I lay my head on pillow



As I lay my head on pillow

Trees covered with flower yellow,
Paper boat moving in pond below.,
Far away a boy negro,
Bouncing up and down his toy  yo yo,
Brings on my face an instant glow,
As I lay my head on pillow...

Watching the un-missable rainbow,
Highlighting the colour of Indigo,
Little birds coming to say hello,
Sings the beautiful doe ,
From garden below,
As I lay my head on pillow..

Pristine and white snow on the window,
Flakes of it coming through the door,
Breeze of chilling wind hits my nose,
As I peep through my old bunglow,
The beauty around in its full  flow,
As I lay my head on pillow..

I feel I'm trapped inside my chateau,
Somewhere in the place,called Monroe,
Bereft of what nature has bestowed,
Fathoming how lovely it would be..
To be amongst the mountains and snow,
I lay and and watch all in tow,
As my head rests on the pillow...


Scheme A aaaaaA aaaaaA axxaaA aaxxaaa
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 11011010 101100101 1010110 101011111 11111101 11111110 100111 1001110 101101101 101001 11001 11111110 100111010 11110101 11101111 1111111 010010111 11111110 111101101 100101 011110101 1110111 110101001 11001101 11111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 873
Words 194
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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Written on October 18, 2022

Submitted by yogitayamini on July 21, 2021

Modified by yogitayamini on October 17, 2022

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