Analysis of As I lay my head on pillow
As I lay my head on pillow
Trees covered with flower yellow,
Paper boat moving in pond below.,
Far away a boy negro,
Bouncing up and down his toy yo yo,
Brings on my face an instant glow,
As I lay my head on pillow...
Watching the un-missable rainbow,
Highlighting the colour of Indigo,
Little birds coming to say hello,
Sings the beautiful doe ,
From garden below,
As I lay my head on pillow..
Pristine and white snow on the window,
Flakes of it coming through the door,
Breeze of chilling wind hits my nose,
As I peep through my old bunglow,
The beauty around in its full flow,
As I lay my head on pillow..
I feel I'm trapped inside my chateau,
Somewhere in the place,called Monroe,
Bereft of what nature has bestowed,
Fathoming how lovely it would be..
To be amongst the mountains and snow,
I lay and and watch all in tow,
As my head rests on the pillow...
Scheme | A aaaaaA aaaaaA axxaaA aaxxaaa |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111110 11011010 101100101 1010110 101011111 11111101 11111110 100111 1001110 101101101 101001 11001 11111110 100111010 11110101 11101111 1111111 010010111 11111110 111101101 100101 011110101 1110111 110101001 11001101 11111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 873 |
Words | 194 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 6, 6, 6, 7 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 132 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
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Written on October 18, 2022
Submitted by yogitayamini on July 21, 2021
Modified by yogitayamini on October 17, 2022
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