Analysis of where i'm from
I am form a family thats hard to love
Kind nice and love but
It doesn’t always feel nice
Lots of pain throughout the years
It’s been tough being all alone
Feels cold, feels lost, feels scary
I been in so much pain but I always have a smile on
Im the light of the darkness
Im bright on the outside
On the inside I have gone out
Mind has been broken like the family
Ever since he left, mom fell into a deep pit
Brother left with wife, sister went with boyfriend
Other sister didn’t care what happened
Family is broken, is falling apart day by day
I tried to fix it but it seems unfixable
Past few days it feels like it’s getting better
Slowly but surely hope to see us be happy again
Hope to see him again has been years since he left
I been hurting badly but soon it will go away
I hope.
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Metre | 11101001111 11011 11111 1110101 11110101 1111110 1101111111011 1011010 111011 10011111 1111010100 101111101011 1011110111 101011110 10011011001111 111111111 11111111010 10110111111001 111101111111 1110101111101 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 786 |
Words | 159 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 4, 6, 5 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 155 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 40 |
About this poem
the poem is about me and my family
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Written on September 03, 2122
Submitted by emilioramos440 on September 03, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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