Analysis of Lake of the heart



Thought-consciousness is aroused in the lake of the heart
Fragile hopes are thrown into the abyss of pain.

The thirsty mind plays with my nightmares
Sitting on the shore of this life even after prolonged swimming.

I light the extinguished lamp with the afflicted face
Memories covered in darkness are the random boundaries.

Yet I sing with hope, the triumph of life
Did not see the way forward, though hear the melodious tune.


Scheme XX XX XX XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1100101001101 101110100111 01011111 1010111110100110 1100101100101 100100101010100 1111101011 111011011001001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 419
Words 73
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by hakikur on November 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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