Analysis of You are not alone



You feel all alone in,
You're combat zone.
You're darkest hours,
In a world
Unknown.

I want you to know,
I hear your soul moan.
You are not alone.

Standing in front of your grave,
Tattered, worn down, windblown.
Ready to burry your bloodstone,
Torn between the devil,
You know, and the
Devil you don't.

I want you to know,
I hear your soul moan.
You are not alone.

In a world so cold,
With the strongest
Of backbone,
You're heart
Self-sown in a
Zigzag pattern the end,
Unknown.

I want you to know,
I hear your soul moan.
You are not alone.

Nearing this milestone,
Patched, stitched, and
Fully grown.
You walk the cobblestone,
To your
Dark thrown,
Finally home.

I want you to know,
I hear your soul moan.
You are not alone.
You
Are
Not
Alone.


Scheme abxxB CBB xabxdb CBB xxbxdxB CBB bxbbxbx CBBxxxb
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1101 11010 001 01 11111 11111 11101 1001111 10111 1011011 101010 1100 1011 11111 11111 11101 00111 1010 11 11 1100 101001 01 11111 11111 11101 1011 110 101 11010 11 11 1001 11111 11111 11101 1 1 1 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 751
Words 179
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 6, 3, 7, 3, 7, 7
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I wrote this today for a friend.

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Written on January 03, 2022

Submitted by melissawines8969 on January 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Melissa Wines

 · 1977 · California

I'm 44 divorced mom of 2 grown kids, and a "Lollie" aka Grandma to 1 beautiful granddaughter. I have always been kinda creative I love to paint, play piano, and guitar, but my all time favorite creative take me away, sooth my soul, go deep in my feelings is by writing. No really great at any of it but I enjoy so thought I would share some in hopes to get some feed back, on what I could do better, does it sound ok. Just want honest feed back. more…

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