Analysis of Can’t you just come to me?



Waking up wishing I didn’t,
Getting off bed and taking a mint.

All these things are being too much,
The only thing I want is feeling your touch.

Can’t u come and live with me?
Lighting up my day while sitting under the three.

It’s been hard for both of us,
So come to me and let’s take the bus.


Scheme AA BB CC DD
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1011011 101101001 11111011 01011111011 1110111 101111101001 1111111 111101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 307
Words 70
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

People can’t know about our relationship because we’re both girls. This is why I wrote this and how I feel about it.

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Written on January 24, 2022

Submitted by Ggxzem on January 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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