Analysis of What I Want



I want to know
the fire of new love
volcanically, all molten passion
that cools into solid devotion
and a decadence of lust

I want to feel
a wellspring of devotion
not a verdant font
but simple, like when you hold
your thumb over the garden hose
release

I need to see
passion that can only be described
as dereliction of defenses
to love laid-out
like charts of desire
the hollow of her neck my compass

I long to labor
at the work of loving
until my hands are scarred
all criss-crossed cuts
left by long hours of abandon

I yearn to hear
a melody of constance
secure in the knowing
of every chord and key
and play my own joyfully

Pour this onto me
ye gods of man
and in the doing
prove that you know
why we need to be known

I want this.


Scheme AXBBX XBXXXX CXXXDX DEXXB XXECC CXEAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 010111 010011010 110110010 0010011 1111 011010 10101 1101111 11100101 01 1111 101110101 10101010 1111 111010 010101110 11110 101110 011111 1111 111101010 1111 0100110 010010 1100101 0111100 11101 1111 00010 1111 111111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 753
Words 163
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Longing

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Written on February 02, 2000

Submitted by BradyB999 on March 14, 2022

Modified on April 11, 2023

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