Analysis of To Be Retrieved



I see peace crumble
Into ashes of despair
While a fire is set ablaze
In the war;
Freezing the souls and
Darkening the nights;
And I ask the World,
'How is a battle won or
Lost when silence is all
We hear and sense?
How does one fight for victory
When blood runs stale
On the ground?'
I listen to agonised pain,
Beating against hearts
And see faces paled,
Affording the feel of cold tears,
Sliding down eyes.
They stir me up
When I travel to distant land
And ask for a crumb of peace
But return back in empty hands
Which only have left
Smoke and ash,
Destruction and death to hold.
Somewhere, however, I swear peace exists
And someday I shall retrieve it
For hope does always prevail.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110 0110101 10101101 001 10010 10001 01101 1101011 111011 1101 11111100 1111 101 110111 10011 01101 01001111 1011 1111 11101101 0110111 10110101 11011 101 0100111 11011101 0111011 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 685
Words 141
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 538
Words per stanza (avg) 130

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Peace

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Submitted by debasishj740 on March 12, 2022

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