Analysis of Laziness Kills!



Can we ever be independent?
If you were in governance,
Would you have attained the so-called development?
Sha! I consider common self dependence.

Chosen to harvest what others should reap,
Browsing on a remaining sip,
Sycophants that often peep,
Natural? No! yet in the body deep.

Anyway, I remembered individuality,
It’s normal, considering the society,
Nature preach for sickness of dignity,
Fir this, and all, I still blame humanity.

Can any give the idea a lie?
Or disqualify my ‘because’ to his ‘why’?
Hmm! Then, let not call it shy,
Is as good as I die!


Scheme ABAB CXCC DDDD EEEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010 1100100 111010110100 11010101010 1011011011 10100101 11101 1001100101 101010000100 110010000100 1011101100 11011110100 1101001001 1010101111 1111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 572
Words 114
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Abu-Ubaida_Sani on April 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abu-Ubaida Sani

I was born in 1993 at Misau LGA, Bauchi State, Nigeria. In the year 2017, I obtained a degree in Education and Hausa from Usmanu Danfodiyo University, Sokoto. I have a number of publications with different academic journals across the globe. Moreover, I have attended and participated in various academic conferences, both national and international. Currently, I am a Hausa language lecturer with the Department of Languages and Cultures, Federal University Gusau, Zamfara, Nigeria. I also provide language services as well as outsource. I have worked on: memoQ, MateCat, Crowdin, Lokalize, Wordfast, SmartCAT, TMC, TMS, Transifex. more…

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