Analysis of Stacked Up Clues



Crazy clusters of insanity.

What I feel for you and what you see in me.

Thoughts of you constantly taking over, all about you, i plea.

From a deep drowned slumber,

I awaken with images of you rushing through.

Decadence as I find pure bliss in your flavor.

Could’ve sworn mamma told me it was rare to occur.

An explosion of emotion we can't burry.

Sometimes it feels like you try to, - in a hurry.

One touch leaves us wanting in the chaos of its erruption.

Unfathomed the hugeness of its combustion.

It surely feels to good to be called a sin.

The sweetness of your lips lingers on mine.

Frowned upon by most who’d delusionally say we’re comitting a crime.

Close enough I listen to you breathing.

Too far you’re out of reach in every sense.

Your energy crawling and pulsating under my skin.

I can feel you thinking what I feel.

Rolling downhill it’s already got built-in momentum, there’s no stopping this gigantic wheel.

Sometimes pieces of our jigsaw is lost,

Why do we allow it, at what cost?

What the sacrifice to unravel the hidden truth’s.

Where should i go look to find your stacked up clues?


Scheme A A A B X B B A A C C C C X X X C D D E E X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101010100 11111011101 1111001010101111 101110 1010110011101 100111110110 111011111101 101010101110 011111110010 1111100010111 10111010 11011111101 0101111011 101111110101 1011101110 11111101001 1100100101011 111110111 10111010110010111010101 0110110111 111011111 101010100101 11111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,134
Words 245
Sentences 21
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 9

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Written on November 30, 2014

Submitted by MarionS on May 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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