Analysis of as felt



walking silently this earth
an on-going breath since birth
learning life a step at a time
in the wind echoes a chime
eyes closed wide open staring
one edge to another daring
all will suffer in pain
sorrow of tears gathering from rain
puddles deepening like the sea
depths that should be let be
tomorrow holding different than today
different ways you may say
always having a little doubt
hearing voices inside make you shout
closed eyes, ears & mouth
best hearts found in the south
winds blowing from east to west
putting everyone to the test
a great star in the north
soon colors falling on the 4th
independence for our freedom
bringing closer to his Kingdom
for all we have he gave
in hope others we help save
loving us with his arms stretched
in the mind an image sketched
his blood like a waterfall
flowing downhill his call
forgive them Father
for they know not what they do...


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJKLLMMNNOOPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011 1110111 10101101 0011001 1111010 11101010 111001 101110011 10100101 111111 0110100101 1001111 1100101 101001111 1111 111001 1101111 1010101 011001 110101011 01011010 10101110 111111 0110111 1011111 0011101 111010 101111 01110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 882
Words 161
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 716
Words per stanza (avg) 161

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a moment in time

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Written on June 14, 2022

Submitted by DDV on June 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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