Analysis of Fault-line
Butterfly- footed,
locked above the barrel
in your new age saintly pose.
Does this mean you're free
from the public gun when it fires entire folk lives.
Some sing "ad infinitum", I am a house sized door
where there's sin and smiting
A fatal loft racing through the Attacama,
wastelands with brown dunes that dye
stainless marrow, crack stainless steel heels.
Some warn - he has Viking fists,
and loves like a bludgeoning riot
feels like a makeshift heaven
the eerie tall dream bringing vertigo.
Yet noone speaks for him, in his favour
speaks of silent tremors - anxiety,
flashing in his clouds, feral lightning,
neon blue lamps bleeding in the basement.
the count, the dark transylvanian Lord,
each night he comes as a horseman,
with hooves drawn like zeros
kicking pleasantries out and about
He goes helter-skelter,
collapsing stars incinerate
He goes into his hell, regretfully
Wears it reluctantly like a bad holiday sweater.
And when it happens will you remain -
butterfly footed, lock your wings on the barrel
sing I can be free, in your new age, saintly pose.
Scheme | XAB CXXD XXX XXED CCDXXEBX FXCF XAB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010 101010 0111101 11111 10101111001011 1110100110111 11101 010110101 111111 101011011 1111101 011010010 110110 010111010 11111011 1110100100 100111010 1011100010 010111 11111010 111110 101001001 111010 0101010 1101110100 1101001011010 011101101 10101111010 111110111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,075 |
Words | 206 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 3, 4, 8, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 122 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
Deals with how preconceived notions from those around you can affect whoever is in love with you or is taking an interest in you.
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Written on December 03, 2021
Submitted by mahatabryan6 on June 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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