Analysis of cant go further



Timidity made me fail
I floundered to inherit your love
But you considered my words trivial
All the words I launched landed like a fracas in your ear
Now all I have is fear
Fear to anticipate your love
Because you protestingly withdrew me from your heart.
Now I am exasperated and perplexed


Scheme ABCDDBEF
Poetic Form
Metre 0100111 110101011 1101011100 10111101010011 111111 1101011 0111011111 1110100001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 291
Words 55
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 237
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

Its about rejections that made me mind blown.i once was in love with somebody who had no thought of me ever since .so everytime i tried to open up to her,she refused me.on the contrary i was shy and that was the worst thing.

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by prosblk2 on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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