Analysis of Lost Inspiration
One day I wake up alone
I ask myself: When are you coming home?
When will I see your face again?
Tell me; are we still together until the end?
When will I see your smile?
Even just for a while
When will I hear your voice?
Tell me; is this your choice?
You choose to say “goodbye”
I never ask the reason why
You choose to go away
And I can’t ask you to stay
Destiny bring us together
Since then I believe in forever
But your CHOICE broke it apart
And rudely broke my heart
Tell me, why do you have to go?
Don’t you know I love so?
But things will never be the same again
As you left me alone in the rain
You’ll never feel this pain
Tell me, when will I love again?
After this heartache I gain.
Is this your kind of game?
Now I was alone
Pretending I can make it on my own
Trying to forget this emotion
As I realize: I LOST my INSPIRATION…
| Scheme | AXBX CCDD EEFF GGHH IIBB BBBX AAJJ |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111101 111111101 11111101 111110100101 111111 101101 111111 111111 11111 11010101 111101 0111111 10011010 111010010 1111101 010111 11111111 111111 1111010101 111101001 110111 11111101 101111 111111 11101 0101111111 101011010 1110111010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 858 |
| Words | 193 |
| Sentences | 12 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 28 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 92 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem in a gloomy weather depressed day of my life. Finishing this poem makes me release all my emotions thinking i could make it on my own.
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Written on September 28, 2010
Submitted by cecilia.dizon1125 on September 27, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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