Analysis of o my mother

CHISA SOLOMON 1982 (Ahoada, Rivers State)



O my mother, do not let me stray
I know I can be stubborn, refusing your every command
Father had in your custody entrusted my life
I have undermined your care and attention,
Stray I don’t want to.

O my mother, shield me from crooked friends
Friends that will make my feet run into evil
I know that you could see them seated
But I couldn’t even at the top of the mountain,
Do not let me stray.

O my mother; rebuke, reprimand and guide me aright
Don’t ever make me feel comfortable at wrongs
I am helpless, my childhood and youth like smoke becloud my mind,
Yet, do not let me stray

O my mother, don’t ever give up on me
Don’t ever get tired guiding me aright even when I get tired of myself
Let me hear your still gentle whisper;
My child, I know you can do it,
O my mother, do not let me stray.


Scheme Abxcx xxxca bxxa xxxxA
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111 1111110010110001 1010110001011 1101110010 11111 1110111101 11111110110 111111110 111101011010 11111 111001100111 110111100011 1110110111111 111111 11101101111 1101101011101111011 111111010 11111111 111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 810
Words 169
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

it is an open appeal to mothers to take the nurturing and grooming of their children a priority. pointing them to the path of success

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by ceke700 on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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CHISA SOLOMON

I am a native of Rivers State, Nigeria. i grew up in a sub-urban community Ahoada, moved to the city (Abuja) few years ago. i am married with three children and I have undying passion for writing and play football sometime. more…

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