Analysis of Broken
One punch two punch, bones shattered
Like a life full of empty promises that didn't matter.
Broken wings that won't fly
Dispirited moments of no reasons why.
Like a captive exile hastened to be free
Like a self enrolled prisoner given no hesitation to be free.
Broken glass spreads the ground
Heavy chains and spares keeps me down.
Emprisoned in the mind of guilt and hate
Embodied by anger and intimate fate.
Alone by the actual vision of sight
Surrounded by demons in the hell of night.
| Scheme | ABCCDDEFGGHH |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111110 101111010011010 101111 01001011101 1010110111 10101100101010111 101101 10101111 10011101 01011001001 01101001011 01011000111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 490 |
| Words | 93 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 12 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 393 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 87 |
About this poem
My life is broken
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Written on December 27, 2022
Submitted by demetri24 on December 27, 2022
Modified on March 15, 2023
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