Analysis of Echoes of a dream
ECHOES OF A DREAM
As I travelled the rocky mountains,
the roads untarred, dust mingled with sweat;
As I stand by the river, and shared a drink,
with fallen leaves, herds of cattle and dead animals;
I looked up at the roaring plane above me,
and said to myself,
That bird, is going to my dreamland.
As I sat with my folks under the big baobab tree,
feeding our eyes on the fashion of the world;
From the only TV set that unites the village,
As I witnessed the freedom, leisure, and pleasures;
of all the shameless ecstasies,
I said to myself;
That is my dreamland.
As I bade farewell to my family,
dressed in white, like victors from war,
sharing hugs with tears of joy;
and pride for their only beacon of hope;
As I was lifted into the sky,
the shaking of heavy metal,
excitement, and fear of the unknown;
I touched the closest metal to me and said,
Big bird, take me to my dreamland.
As I sit in my room, weak, frail,
like the last leaf of fall;
My room, dark, quiet, like my world;
I wish I could stop the clock from ticking.
Quiet, I need some quiet, to talk to my soul,
And inquire of my destiny.
Slowly, I moved toward the mirror,
and turned on the light;
The only one I need to face is my soul.
Yes, I want to see her face.
I lifted my head with a heavy heart and asked;
This is my dreamland,
But where is my dream?
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101 111001010 01111011 11110100101 1101111001100 11110101011 0111 11110111 111111100111 101011010101 1010111101010 111001010010 110101 1111 1111 111111100 10111011 1011111 0111101011 111100101 01011010 010011001 11010101101 1111111 11101111 101111 11110111 1111101110 101111011111 00111100 101101010 01101 01011111111 1111101 110111010101 1111 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,353 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 7, 9, 6, 7 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 202 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
About this poem
Dedicated to an African who travelled to America for greener pastures but ended up HIV positive due to promiscuity to achieve that dream
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Written on January 30, 2016
Submitted by agakopia on December 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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