Analysis of Mixed Ancient Metaphors



The words taste like music
from worlds long ago
Each letter resavored
in harmonies old

Coming to harvest
their sweetness imbues
A cave for an orchard
in wall painted hues

Old symbols retilling
those questions inside
Reborn when discovered
then never to hide

The silos refilling
new birthrights to seed
Replanted within us
—a symphony freed

(The New Room: January, 2023)


Scheme AXBB BCBC ABBB ABCB X
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 11101 1101 01001 10110 1101 011110 01101 1101 11001 111010 11011 011 1111 010011 01001 011100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 378
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 19, 2023

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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