Analysis of Stedfastness, as with Job



What I have lost
And what I have suffered.
Still God is bright shining
Supreme in my heart.
Devil has tried
And Devil has tested
Have I been bested?
By lust and cruel art?
Friends sit beside me
They offer their “wisdom”.
But wisdom so seldom
Shows up in rebuke.
Wastrels cruel taunt me
On streets of declension
Lost rank and privilege
Might make me puke.
Comes now a storm?
Did we switch to King Lear?
Comes now my Lord.
Who else should I fear?
I am unworthy
But He plans a come through.
Broken my heart.
But such breaking is dear.


Scheme ABCDEFFDGHHIGJKILMNMGODM
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 011110 111110 01011 1011 010110 11110 110101 11011 110110 110110 11001 11011 1111 11010 1111 1101 111111 1111 11111 11010 111011 1011 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 535
Words 115
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 414
Words per stanza (avg) 102
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Written on February 14, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 14, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 14, 2023

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Doug Blair

 · 1951 · London

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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