Analysis of the grass moves like the eyelashes of virgins under water



the grass moves like the eyelashes of virgins under water

touches people floating low above the ground
like naughty ghosts

the voices of teenagers bear fruit in the twilight

in everything the stars do not do there is some detachment

if you're lucky
you will see a bat listed in the red book
or a woman who came to the store in a dressing gown

it can be seen on the streetsso independent cinema
that its only viewer is your bone marrow


Scheme X XX X X XXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101101010 10101010101 1101 01011011001 01001111111010 1110 11101100011 10101110100101 1111101010100 11101011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 439
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by Sviatoslav on March 28, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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