Analysis of Brightness falls
Spyros Koroniotis 1978 (Athens)
Βrightness falls on our eyes,
like the bright summer sunsets,
the moon revolves around the earth,
and we are blessed,
you wear a bright summer dress,
you are earthy, positive, tasty,
you unwind,
you are freedom,
you are breath and oblivion,
and you stroll down the pathways of the heart
and you rise and you fall like the temperature,
healing,
and I come to you and and I am kneeling,
I have sunshine in buckets,
as luck would have it I am released,
you are my girl, my sunlight,
my rest,
my luck,
you are a spoonful of joy
and you are right on the track,
can I wake you with kisses,
and be with you and hold you,
and if you ever fail,
never tell you I told you,
and to move you with song and to savour the moment,
and together to go roaming
and be,
and stay in my heart,
and unfold all your love,
and cling to your warm summer body,
and taste the sand,
and your feet step on mine and you lure me,
into your cave were you cure me,
for what is life without love,
let’s carve out the stars.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKLLMNODPQRSTUTVLFJWFYFFWZ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011101 101101 01010101 0111 1101101 111010010 101 1110 11100100 011101101 01101110100 10 01111001110 111010 111111101 111111 11 11 110111 0111101 1111110 0111011 011101 1011111 011111011010 00101110 01 01011 001111 011111010 0101 0111110111 01110111 1111011 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 996 |
Words | 228 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 35 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 755 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 197 |
About this poem
This is a hyper love poem on all things that make love rich for two lovers; It's a poem on devotion, on nature and on oblivion.
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Written on February 09, 2023
Submitted by Afriendtothemartyr on May 08, 2023
Modified by Afriendtothemartyr on May 08, 2023
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