Analysis of I have something I want to show



I have something I want to show
I am sure your mind will blow
Stop skipping stones and let’s go!
I promise it’s near the rabbit’s burrow
I planted it last month so it will grow
It took so long I think it’s very slow
It gets sad and wilts in the shadow
When the sun comes out it always glow
When you see it don’t forget to say Hello!
I have a sunflower I want to show!


Scheme AAAAAAAAAA
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 11101111 1111111 1101011 1101101010 1101111111 1111111101 11101001 10111111 11111011101 110101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 378
Words 80
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 282
Words per stanza (avg) 78

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A children's poem

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Submitted by Mariyum on May 23, 2023

Modified by Mariyum on May 23, 2023

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