Analysis of He Is My Escape



His voice…
His words…
No one ever left me speechless before.

His eyes…
They met mine…
And I’ve been lost ever since.

This secret…
It’s a rush…
But I want to scream it,
From the highest mountain top.

Sober as a judge…
Yet high off his memory…
My feet,
They can’t seem to touch the ground.

Is it the adrenaline…?
Or is it the way his hand holds mine…?
My hand fits in his,
Like a once lost puzzle piece.

Is it the way we laugh…
When the pieces aren’t placed our own way…?
I want it my way,
He wants it his way,
But I win.

The way he makes me smile…
When the music says it better…
Better than I ever could.

The music…
The words…
They lift me,
Higher and higher,
As I drift away.

He is my escape…


Scheme XAX XBX CXCX XDXX XBXX XEEEX XFX XADFE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 1110111001 11 111 0111101 110 101 111111 1010101 10101 1111100 11 1111101 1100100 111011111 11101 1011101 110111 10101011011 11111 11111 111 011111 10101110 1011101 010 01 111 10010 11101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 742
Words 168
Sentences 12
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 4, 4, 5, 3, 5, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Written on June 01, 2017

Submitted by Unnamed19s on September 30, 2023

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Stephanie Patuleia

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