Analysis of UNTITLED (December '23)
Nicodemus 1997 (St. Louis)
Snippets of memories
Both painful & delightful
Flash before my eyes
I feel both protected & ridiculed
Like the world knows something I don't
And there's a lot that I know
Like that I was supposed to be born a boy
Perhaps a savior
Yet I'm trapped by expectations & coverups
Glossed over details
Southern hemisphere versus Northern
All crammed into one body--
A long lineage of important family members
Wasted on my body, my brain, my skill, my circumstance
What do the oceans have to say about this?
The air? The earth, fire, and wood?
The metal ore bore deep within the Earth's crust?
How long must I remain silent?
How long must I pretend to forgive and forget?
While hate & anger & revenge brew deep in my chest?
Restless nights spent contemplating starting from scratch
New day, new night, new me, new life
I do odd math in my head
Suffer either loudly or in silence about decades of trauma
Decades of good, bad, and ugly
Culminating into a life changing year
Bending reality at a whim; not my doing
Thinking back to all the signs, the omens
The years spent tortured & beaten down--
I am too strong for this
Too loud for this
No more houses of cards, of glass
You can only hide me from the public eye
For so long
Until I bite the bait
Contemplate destruction of self,
Or better yet, I'll write a long apology letter
For taking up space sheerly by existing
You'll never see me coming
Until I round the corner,
Pen in hand,
Tip touching skin
Penetrating to fascia
Just like the good old days.
Scheme | X X X X X X X A X X X B X X C X X X X X D X X X B X E X X C C X X X X X A E E A X X D X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101100 110010 10111 11101010 10111011 0101111 11110111101 01010 111101010 11001 10101010 1101110 01100101010010 1011101111110 11010111011 01011001 01011101011 11110110 111101101001 11100111011 10111001011 11111111 1111011 10101010100101110 01111010 1000101101 10101011110 1011101010 01110101 111111 1111 11101111 11101110101 111 011101 1001011 11011101010010 1101111010 1101110 0111010 101 1101 10011 110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,598 |
Words | 346 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 44 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 27 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 6 |
About this poem
One of the first poems I've written in months as of today. I felt the need to get out a lot of emotions and memories all at once; The result is a combination of realism and fantasy for the reader.
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