Analysis of Daydream



There is this insecure part of me.
A very heavy branch on my tree.
I dont carry it for nothing. I saunter on.
Trim my limbs down nonchalant.
Sometimes it gets the best of me.
When my canopy starts to scream
of its southern Gothic dreams.
When my voice gets lost in all the sound and the fury.

Suddenly your smile makes everything thing okay.
My petals shudder off.
All of fall's lost melancholy leaves.
Forgive that droopy moment.
Stemmed from regret attunement

Yeah, Darling heart dont mind me
I just noticed the sky looked blue.
No need for a rain check.
Forever in an instant.
I just took my eyes off you.


Scheme AAXBAXXA XXXCB ADXCD
Poetic Form
Metre 111100111 010101111 111011101101 111101 01110111 11100111 1110101 1111101010010 1001111011 110101 11111001 0111010 11011 1101111 11100111 111011 0100110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 132
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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a moment of time

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Written on January 24, 2024

Submitted by heath8578 on January 24, 2024

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Heath Merchant

I've been writing since I was 13. Autistic. Undiagnosed and overlooked until 30. Just realizing I could submit my writings. more…

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