Analysis of "Winter-the lost soul"



Their eyes sparkle like stars
their smile as bright as the moon
their hugs as warm as the sun,
but somewhere in the dew of winters is lost the ever loving soul
the mist hides the afternoon sun,
the clouds cover the stars and the moon,
Losing everything in hand
curled up in those winter sheets,
fighting the urge to get up
Is that soul lost or is it dead?
No one knows,
Nobody cares
in the complete silence all i hear is the dew drops falling to the ground...
Is that sould lost or is it dead?


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 494
Words 106
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 386
Words per stanza (avg) 98

About this poem

This poem is about a souls which get lost in the mist of winters. The person that was as bright as the sun is now someone whose as cold as ice.. Feeling dull and hopeless....

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Written on January 24, 2024

Submitted by kashvipunj115 on February 02, 2024

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Kashvi punj

 · 2009 · Chandigarh

My name is kashvi and I live in India. Im currently 14 and have recently started writing poetry. I write poetry based on my observations of my surroundings and sometimes also about my personal feelings or thoughts.. I feel it helps me express my emotions in words. I have written quite a few poems but I thought that this was the best one. Also this is my first time sending an entry for a competition. more…

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