Analysis of Stay there
Stay there ,I will be back in a moment
U went away while I waited at the lakefront..
Breeze blowing silently ,ducks quacking heavily,
Humming in my ears, your voice made me repent…
Why did I let go of you ….or
Why didn’t I not hold onto you…..
For I know , if I had resisted…
You wouldn’t have wished to leave me unassisted ..
Now the flashbacks keeps coming before me..
Hows and whys make an ardent plea…
What if you had stayed a little longer,
Life would have been much warmer ,and
Our bond more than stronger…
Oh how I long for those precious pleasures,
When even we had nothing to say…
The silence still spoke, and we still could hear,
The unsaid rants and happiness that now I treasure…
Waiting on the edge to restart again,
Relive the joys and cherish those lovely moments..
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111110010 11011110101 11010011100 10011111101 11111111 11111101 111111010 1111111010 101110011 10111101 1111101010 11111100 1011110 1111111010 110111011 0101101111 0011010011110 1010110101 010101011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 802 |
Words | 157 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 19 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 602 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 147 |
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Written on April 18, 2005
Submitted by yogitayamini on April 18, 2024
Modified by yogitayamini on April 18, 2024
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