Analysis of Stay there



Stay there ,I will be back in a moment
U went away while I waited at the lakefront..
Breeze blowing silently ,ducks quacking heavily,
Humming in my ears, your voice made me repent…
Why did I let go of you ….or
Why didn’t I not hold onto you…..
For I know , if I had resisted…
You wouldn’t have wished to leave me unassisted ..
Now the flashbacks keeps coming before me..
Hows and whys make an ardent plea…
What if you had stayed a little longer,
Life would have been much warmer ,and
Our bond more than stronger…
Oh how I long for those precious pleasures,
When even we had nothing to say…
The silence still spoke, and we still could hear,
The unsaid rants and happiness that now I treasure…
Waiting on the edge to restart again,
Relive the joys and cherish those lovely moments..


Scheme AABCDEFFBBDGDHIJDKL
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110010 11011110101 11010011100 10011111101 11111111 11111101 111111010 1111111010 101110011 10111101 1111101010 11111100 1011110 1111111010 110111011 0101101111 0011010011110 1010110101 010101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 802
Words 157
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 602
Words per stanza (avg) 147
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Written on April 18, 2005

Submitted by yogitayamini on April 18, 2024

Modified by yogitayamini on April 18, 2024

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Yogita Yamini

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