Analysis of Disturbed at Daybreak



A flock of long-billed corellas
Calls on the wing a mournful song
At daybreak, to gather its throng.

These ragged arrow-headed birds –
Their oversized secateur beaks
Are snipping tools for fruits and seeds.

Their blue encircled, granite eyes
Are framed with reddish spectacles
Amidst a flutter of feathers.

As daybreak moves to noon, then night,
This ramshackle flock of cockies
Calls on the wing once more – “We’re gone!”


Scheme ABB AAA AAA XAX
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 11010101 1111011 11010101 1101001 1111101 11010101 11110100 01010110 1111111 110111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 435
Words 78
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

These birds woke me up too early one Sunday morning.

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Written on February 02, 2021

Submitted by susannaelliott on April 20, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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