Analysis of Can you live Happy



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Can you live Happy

In this exact moment of time we are present and still somewhere else as a flicker from our memories there's an energy from our past days. As each day puts us further from those yesterday's as long as our memory of them gives them maintaining life there remains lessons gallows and missed mistakes that maybe still hold a punishment for. Our attachment to these past eras still has influence on us and if left unattended they could drag us down just for the sake of their own darkness. We must through the proper efforts and faith keep those dark elements in the past buried in the ground and keep them from further destruction in our lives. Getting over them and moving forward with the positivity of God's grace and Joy will always heal each of us. When it's dark you see nothing and that's the value we shall give those past mistakes nothing. We've learned and some lessons may still need to be reintroduced and for that we don't need to revive those past occurrences.  When you put and keep your heart and soul exposed to God's light through the way you love and live bright sunny days will be upon you always.


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Written on May 22, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on May 23, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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