Analysis of In the space of a magical life



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In the space of a magical life.

Hand in Hand we look into each other's eyes as we ride the waves of sunlight across the horizon into a land beyond the love and understanding required as a couple. The glitter of the stars bounce off of us because they are not good enough for the love we carry. The clouds in the sky will shield us as space rocks try and hit us cause they R jealous of our love. The time seems to stand still for from our presence the sky has turned cotton candy pink and the moon feels extra special from that. As we look back towards the ground it looks like other couples R out enjoying the coming of night and the snuggle factor is upon them. With us in an embrace all the bad energy runs for the shadows caused by the darkness of the underground. Another day in the life of those of whom know love. The heart and soul now feel the peace and it's time to turn out the lights and gently fall into slumber. The adventure of your dreams await.


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Characters 974
Words 192
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 257
Words per line (avg) 63
Letters per stanza (avg) 386
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Written on June 28, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on June 28, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

 · 1960 · Ft Belvoir

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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