Analysis of Betrayal



How the whole world goes silent.
How many of us are here but inside the realms may be dying?
You go in a room, so very silent.
So very loud though.
Go sit in the corner.
Oh no, here he comes,
Fuck he's gonna get violent.
I'm gonna go weak and silent.
Numb my mind.
And hey girl don't start ur crying.
Remember to be strong and know your worth,
Soon it will be over until,
It may hurt.
But you come out and let him have that victory.
You know he is so insecure and just a fkn worthless piece, that is dirt.
Baby girl he will get hurt.
It may be soon.
Maybe days, hours, months or years.
Who could ever know?
It might be never.
Prepare yourself for that.
Because flea ass bitches dont and will not last.
Remember it, remember it to the finest.
He didn't create This monster.
You did because of him.
The devious outrageous psychological chemical in the tiny brain they claim he has created a parallel universe in your amazing mind that left him dazed in hell and then there was you doomed and confined.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,025
Words 218
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 771
Words per stanza (avg) 193

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An abusive marriage.

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Written on June 16, 2024

Submitted by sonnyahgonagetcha on June 16, 2024

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