Analysis of Change In The Wishing



Is thinking sufficient
to turn us around

Cerebral in nature
as problems surround

For thousands of years
our nose to the stone

We’ve battled our nature
and mostly we drone

The answers elude us
the questions forbear

While sins of our fathers
live on in the air

The harder we toil
the greater we fail

All change in the wishing
— our fortunes entail

(Saint Davids Pennsylvania: September, 2024)


Scheme XA BA CD BD XB CX XE XE B
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 11101 100010 11001 11011 101101 1101010 01011 010011 0101 1111010 11001 01011 01011 110010 101001 110010010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 402
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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