Analysis of The Secret Room



A door opens wide, and glowing lights shines;
It was a door covered in gorgeous vines;

I step in with excitement and professing glee;
It's a magical secret room just for me;

The light is so bright, I cover my eyes;
It was so amazing I ended with surprise;

I see a huge statue, it's so wide and tall;
It is in a long, grand, beautiful hall;

A picture I see with flowers of beauty;
So grand and lovely, a joy not a duty;

An enchanting table covered with cloth;
Its enchantment takes away anyone's wroth;

It is time to end my journey, my friend;
I will wait patiently until you return again.


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Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 0110101011 1101100101 110101000101 10100101111 0111111011 111010110101 1101111101 1100111001 01011110110 11010011010 1010101011 1010101101 1111111011 1111000110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 594
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

A momentary glimpse into the beauty behind a secret, and the reality that we must always return to.

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Written on October 12, 2024

Submitted by krusewife612 on October 12, 2024

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Nataleigh Kruse

9 years old. Loves horses, nature, and God most of all. Enjoys reading her Bible and meeting new friends. This is her first poem. more…

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